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J'ai trouvé cela très bien pour un premier RP malgré quelque faute de frappes qui n'empêche en rien la lecture.
Je trouve juste que tu as trop de dialogue tu aurais dut intégré un peu plus de déscription mais cela n'est que mon avis personnel certain préfère ainsi.
Bonne chance pour la suite nananne.
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